The Time Machine

My Critic

Plot:

The story is about two students, Nick and Laurie and about a professor and his assistant. Nick and Laurie are the new assistants of the professor. He works to develop his Time Machine but he has to solve a mathematical equation. Nick and Laurie solve it. They want to travel to ancient China to find a plant that can produce for one thousand years more oxygen. They find it, but the professor and Bertha (his personal assistant) capture Laurie and they travel to future China. Here, they sell the oxygen of the plant to be rich. But Nick is finding to Laurie and a Chinese man is finding to his plant. They arrive and free Laurie. The Chinese man returns to ancient China with the plant. Nick and Laurie say is better like this.

Costumes:

The costumes were very well. The Bertha’s costume was the best. She wore a scientist blouse in the laboratory and a big white coat in future China. The professor had a scientist blouse in the laboratory and he wore a coat in future China. But his coat was brown. Nick and Laurie never change of costumes. Laurie’s costume was green and black. Nick’s one was orange and black.

Lights:

The lights were very well. They changed every moment for the different places. The best part was time machine’s lights. It was a green laser and there was a good music henever a character entered into it. In this moment they changed scene. For when the plyers  were playing, there was a clear light. The lights are important because they create the spectator’s illusion.

The Play

Ema and Jenny are two students in a scientific school in New York. In holiday they go to Italia to visit this country. One day, they visit a village near to Rome.

-          Hello, I’m Benedetta. I’ll guide you in this village.

-          Hi, we are Jenny and Ema. We are American.

-          I have a question : what has happened with this city ?

-          Look ! Can you see this mountain? It’s a volcano. In the year 1022, it exploited, and everybody in the village is dead. But the legend say : “ Only one in the village survive “

-          Oh, it’s terrible.

Later, in the hostel....

  

-          Jenny, we have to save this people!!

-          How???

-          We can construct a Time Machine and travel in the time with it.

-          Oh yes! Very good idea!!

-          Now we have to go in NY and construct it!!

-          Just Do It!!

One month later...

-          Good! We finished the Time Machine!!

-          Now go to the ancient Italia!

-          And save the Indians!

-          Let’s GO !!

Shlak !! ( Time Machine )

There is an Indian dancing..

-          Hello, what’s your name??

-          My name is Lula.

-          You have to go out of the village. You are in danger.

-          Why?

-          This mountain is a volcano. And it wills explote!

-          I don’t create you. Is our magic mountain!  It give energy to us  !

-          No, it’s a volcano and you have to create me.

-          No. I don’t create you.

Ema and Jenny only...

-          She has to create us.  We can take some photos of her village and we show him.

-          I can take photos with my phone!

-          Ok!

Shlak !! ( Time Machine )

The girls are in their time and take photos.

Shlak !! ( Time Machine )

They come back with the Lula.

-          Lula, Lula !

-          Here I am !

-          We have photos! Now you create me ?

-          It is my village?

-          Yes, but  prevent the others !

-          Ok, you have to run!

-          Of course! But  now I will run with the others! Come back to your time relax !

-          Ok... Bye bye !  

-          Thanks ! Bye !

Shlak !! ( Time Machine )

-          Now we are at home...

-          Uf !

     

            Fin